Wednesday, 14 June 2017

Five sentence fiction - Memories.


This week's word  : RAIN.


           The rain always did this to her....it brought back memories buried deep down all through the year. And how many years had it been? Almost five years since that fateful day... the day it had rained like the  world would come to an end.  Her haste to reach the church where Ryan would be waiting for her...the rush to cross the water-logged street...thoughts of Ryan that crowded her mind every minute...plans for their happy future.... her  train of thoughts had picked up speed and she had failed to apply the brakes in time.
         Time, indeed, passes by real slow when all you do is lie on a hospital bed looking out of  a tiny window, chasing rainbows.
    

2 comments:

  1. Every word is sketched in such a beautiful manner, description and down-to-earth emotions expressing on canvas relationship which feels like a long story. The imagery is terrific and aesthetic. It tears the heart in the end.

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    1. Thank you so much, Vishal! You are the first person to visit this blog of mine, I guess!
      Loved your encouraging comment!
      Thanks a ton!

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